Self Evaluation add image of feedback

Happy with the feedback I received, was positive , although could have made more use of the crit as work was not up to date due to time constraints but a good idea of my approach was shown.

The main comment which came up was about how the written related to the practical. Given the nature of my project, a heavy part of the practical research must come first as this informs the essay as I refer directly to the practical work. However given that the information gathering in the practical element is nearly over, I now know I need to  alter  my question slightly. Given that I am working with a vulnerable group of people turn out is low so a workshop as I initially project plan isn't going to happen. But I still have a lot of information to work with from this research. 

The second key thing is the final outcome. I have realized that I don't know how this will work until all the information has been collected and I can start to develop and work with it.